Advantage and Disadvantage of New Technology
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Technology has affected society and its surroundings in a number of ways. In many societies, technology has helped develop more advanced economies, commerce, education, and has allowed the rise of a leisure class. As the world changed rapidly, technology must change in order to indulge for the new world experience. Beside, the emersion of the new technology produces link able to connect with the future. Various implementations of new technology influence the values of a society and it often raises new ethical issues. This essay will outline the advantages and disadvantages of the new technology. The advantages for new technology include easy access to information and new ways of learning. On the other hand the disadvantages of this setting are the security measure for children and adolescents and increasing rate of cyber-bullying.
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%26quot;As the world changed rapidly, technology must change in order to indulge for the new world experience%26quot;
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As the world changes rapidly, technology must change in order to prepare for the new world experience.
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%26quot;Beside, the emersion of the new technology produces link able to connect with the future.%26quot;
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The emersion of new technology produces links that are able to connect with the future.
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%26quot;This essay will outline the advantages and disadvantages of the new technology. The advantages for new technology include easy access to information and new ways of learning. On the other hand the disadvantages of this setting are the security measure for children and adolescents and increasing rate of cyber-bullying.%26quot;
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There are various advantages and disadvantages to the expansion of new technology.
One advantage, for example, would include easy access to information and innovative ways of learning.
However on the other hand, having this modern technology has given rise to the cyber-bullying of children and adolescents.
